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A pitch for an upper middle-grade graphic novel

Premise:
A young boy goes through a portal to a magic land in hopes of being a hero only to discover they don’t need him there — now, a fugitive, he must find a quest and fulfill his heroic destiny before they send him home. Because Gus is definitely the Chosen One.

Story:

Gus, almost 13 years old, is disillusioned with life. His parents, despite what they say, don’t have time for him; his best friend is secretly hanging out with the school bully; and worst of all, on his birthday he’ll be officially too old to be invited to Hogwarts (which he is sure exists). It’s time to retire his childish fantasy books, stop searching for Narnia, and forget about escaping to a world where he can finally be someone special.

So when Gus finds a letter that opens a door to a real-life magic world called Logos he immediately goes through — even though it’s addressed to someone else. Upon arriving, Gus is taken aback to discover there are no world-altering quests awaiting him. Instead, Logos has saved itself; it’s been ages since the locals stopped trusting their biggest problems to random children. But Gus needs to be a hero; he won’t go back to a world where he feels like a mistake.

Gus’s journey takes him to the Hero Academy, which oversees quests and prophecies, where he discovers that not only is he not needed, he’s not wanted. Apparently, humans aren’t supposed to be able to access Logos anymore; something has gone wrong. Pursued by a legion of legally-registered Heroes, Gus is forced to become a fugitive in a world he knows he’s supposed to save… a situation made worse when Gus accidentally (on purpose) destroys the Academy’s main castle.

Convinced the Hero Academy is evil – why else would they try to get rid of him – Gus adventures to uncover the truth, find his destiny, and save the world… whether he’s the chosen one or not.

Genre and style: Middle Grade Graphic Novel age 10-12, Portal Fantasy Adventure

Theme: A story about learning that you must choose your own path in life and how to do that.

Length: 255 pages complete manuscript. 4 pages finished art, 1 page inked to show process.

Tone: Adventure Time meets The Phantom Tollbooth.

Art style: Similar to Aster and the Accidental Magic (Thom Pico), Mel The Chosen One (Rachele Aragno), Hilda (Luke Pearson).

Comp Titles: Nico Bravo (Mike Cavallaro), Storyspinners (Scott Reitgen), Amulet (Kazu Kibuishi)

 

The following are sample pages from when Gus enters the magic land for the first time (pg 39-43)

If you’re an agent or publisher and are interested, please send me an email at kyle.siemens@gmail.com or use the contact form on this site.